Brava, Simone! Your essay examines and defines your identity through your symbolic use of your hair for both your religion and your femininity. Your opening image grabbed my attention, and your use of your extended metaphor worked. I look forward to reading more of your work, for you will be a voice for your generation.
Brava, Simone! Your essay examines and defines your identity through your symbolic use of your hair for both your religion and your femininity. Your opening image grabbed my attention, and your use of your extended metaphor worked. I look forward to reading more of your work, for you will be a voice for your generation.